Wright’s Writing Corner — Open Active

Latest from an ongoing series of writing tips from L. Jagi Lamplighter:

http://arhyalon.livejournal.com/117379.html

In which is discussed the technique called in medias res of opening a story or scene in the midst of the action.

“I cut hard to the right, avoiding an oncoming truck. We had risen early this morning so we could wash the car before setting out. At the time, it had not occurred to us that they might find us during the trip, so we had not brought our weapons. If they caught us, all we had to defend ourselves with was my little brother’s soccer cleat that he left in the car by mistake and an old umbrella.”

I am waiting to see what Doctor Who of Gallifrey, Neo, Spock of Vulcan, Scaramouche, the beautiful yet deadly Patricia Savage, and the plucky yet cylindrical robot R2D2 can do to escape the menace of the Helmuth of Boskone, Owlman of Earth Three, Benjacomin Bozart of Viola Siderea, The Phantom of the Opera, the beautiful yet deadly Fah lo Suee and the time-traveling monstrosity known only as The Shrike as they speed down the energy-pavement of the Time Road past the Triassic yet losing distance to the combination of Owlcycles, black limousines, hoverboards, dacoit assassins and spacepirateships hot on their trail of terror. Unfortunately, the chase scene used as an example (1) does not come from a real story and (2) does not mention any of these characters. Too bad. I was waiting for the Doctor to use the umbrella as a satellite dish to contact the mothership of the E.T. before the Men in Black, armed with flashy-things, cornered the big-eyed little creature. I also wanted to see Andre-Louis Moreau use the soccer cleat to defeat “Erik” Edouard LaFosse and his Punjab Lasso while the two men, one masked and the other disguised as a long-nosed opera clown, duel to the death atop the burning and driverless oil tank trunk.